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This is my Poem Tree,
It starts with a root.

It grows to a sprout;
do you think it will bear fruit?

It stretches to a seedling,
forming little limbs.

I hope it will shade me,
am I going out on a whim?

Its bark starts to harden,
into textures now brown.

It’s growing evermore taller,
without a single sound.

Leaves start to form,
Bright green and veined.

Growing strong and mighty,
No truth to be feigned.

Now a fully grown tree,
ready to inspire.

Words etched into its trunk,
for future poets to aspire.

They’re meant to encourage,
the words that they read,
“The largest of accomplishments,
start from a seed”.
:iconthisbleedingrose:

Author's Comments

I really, REALLY like this one. I believe it has a lot more substance then my other poems usually do.

Hope you guys enjoy it as much as I do.

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:iconmoonlitcrescent:
You are most impressive and clever with words, missy.

I really like this too - it paints an excelent mental picture for one. Fantastic!

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- CYCLONE HITS CEMETERY - HUNDREDS DEAD
- CHILDREN MAKE NUTRITIOUS SNACKS
- IS THERE A RING OF DEBRIS AROUND URANUS?
- PATIENT AT DEATH'S DOOR - DOCTORS PULL HIM THROUGH
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:iconthisbleedingrose:
Well thankyou very much *bows* haha.

Thanks, what I like, is that it's talking about the creating of a poem,
but through the imagery of a growing tree.

I like it because it's different to what I usually write.

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:iconmoonlitcrescent:
:clap: :D

True, and clever it is.

Different, but different can be good :)

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Humorous real world newspaper headlines:

- CYCLONE HITS CEMETERY - HUNDREDS DEAD
- CHILDREN MAKE NUTRITIOUS SNACKS
- IS THERE A RING OF DEBRIS AROUND URANUS?
- PATIENT AT DEATH'S DOOR - DOCTORS PULL HIM THROUGH
+ more to come!
:iconthisbleedingrose:
Thanks :)

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:iconmoonlitcrescent:
No need to thank me :)

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Humorous real world newspaper headlines:

- CYCLONE HITS CEMETERY - HUNDREDS DEAD
- CHILDREN MAKE NUTRITIOUS SNACKS
- IS THERE A RING OF DEBRIS AROUND URANUS?
- PATIENT AT DEATH'S DOOR - DOCTORS PULL HIM THROUGH
+ more to come!
:iconthisbleedingrose:
xD

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:iconmoonlitcrescent:
:handshake:

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Humorous real world newspaper headlines:

- CYCLONE HITS CEMETERY - HUNDREDS DEAD
- CHILDREN MAKE NUTRITIOUS SNACKS
- IS THERE A RING OF DEBRIS AROUND URANUS?
- PATIENT AT DEATH'S DOOR - DOCTORS PULL HIM THROUGH
+ more to come!
:iconholygarbage:
One word, yum.

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:iconthisbleedingrose:
Ahh, yum? Alright, if that's the way you feel, haha.

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